Matt Bellamy

I liked the ending, too, it is a little lonely, especially the lambs... I don't think you need the first line. I mean, the title already explains what the poem ...

Very well written, I like your style. The indentation of that line in the first stanza is nice. Someone once said to me that poems which only address a single ...

Wow, you're keeping me busy! :lol: Done!

This is very cute! Only a couple of things: Who’s big brother and how titanic sank. Firstly, Titanic needs a capital letter, and I personally would put "the Titanic". Also, ...

Woot! *Throws confetti*

I think that if a blog is marked for deletion, nobody can see it, but it doesn't actually get deleted until an admin deletes it manually.

BBB - Probably because kids are more susceptible to advertising. I would do it, as long as it makes sense to the story, though mentioning Coke every 5,000 words seems ...

Event seven of the writing olympics - my entry is the first paragraph of my story.

Paulo couldn’t tell whether the sun was rising or setting. Sitting on a bridge looking out onto the river, he could see pillars of beautiful old buildings, fluffy-headed trees and ...

Tolkien springs to mind...

If your poem has only three good lines in it, then it should only be three lines long. Can't remember where I heard that, though.

Done! Very impressed with your rewrite, fun4eva, well done.

I'm impressed with the changes you have made - the rhyming scheme is a lot better now, so it's much easier to read, and a lot tidier, so well done ...

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All critiques have been done, sorry for the delay! Let me know if you want any more, I'll try to be quicker next time. xD